Main character with full character traits
story line (plot 101)
Begging in a lab with the boss and the four people
Desruption:they are in the Roman period
Conflict:they go to jail (man vs society)
Resolution:they get all the materials and make a power generator
Ending:they are now in the dinosaur period and find out that Chris he betrayed them
moment in your narrative
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Moment in your narrative:
moment in your narrative
- what are the conflicts?
- which other characters?
- how does your character grow, or confirm a characteristic?
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- to be approved by me if not one of our texts this year
- example piece(s) posted
- description, the way the author writes it
- dialogue, the way the author writes it
The conflicts is when the machine breaks down and they go to the wrong time period (men vs technology).
The other characters are Krys and Cynux.
My character grows more character traits, the trait he grows is he gets braver.
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My story I am looking at:sound of thunder
The author describes it with lots of detail,either in the speech or in the text.
The author uses dialogue with lots of detail in the speech and most of the story is speech. Also in the speech he does not go straight to the point he writes something before it then he will get to the point.

