Tuesday, March 22, 2016

Where are we now

Genre

Main character with full character traits

story line (plot 101) 
Begging in a lab with the boss and the four people
Desruption:they are in the Roman period
Conflict:they go to jail (man vs society) 
Resolution:they get all the materials and make a power generator
Ending:they are now in the dinosaur period and find out that Chris he betrayed them

moment in your narrative
  • what are the conflicts?
  • which other characters?
  • how does your character grow, or confirm a characteristic?

Model text
  • to be approved by me if not one of our texts this year
  • example piece(s) posted
  • description, the way the author writes it
  • dialogue, the way the author writes it

Moment in your narrative:
The conflicts is when the machine breaks down and they go to the wrong time period (men vs technology).
The other characters are Krys and Cynux.
My character grows more character traits, the trait he grows is he gets braver. 

Model text
My story I am looking at:sound of thunder


The author describes it with lots of detail,either in the speech or in the text.
The author uses dialogue with lots of detail in the speech and most of the story is speech. Also in the speech he does not go straight to the point he writes something before it then he will get to the point.

Thursday, March 3, 2016

Story

Time is deadly
Genre: Sci-fi,historical fiction
So this guy called Jeff goes through a time machine and gets trapped in the Roman period. They find out one of there power sources is missing and they need to get resources to make a new one.  They first go to a shop and then they get caught stealing so they all go to jail. Then they escape and everybody is looking for them. So it is hard to get the glass grass tree bark and cow blood to make a new power source.In the end they make one a go in the time machine. But when they come out they are in the dinosaur period.

Conflict:Man vs technology 
Character: Jeff,Christopher,Krys,Cynux
Antagonist: Christopher
Protagonist:Jeff

Jeff Actus-gullible,clever, scared and then brave and weak.
Wants: To save the world
Situation:he will be very guillable


Christopher medius-deceiving,mean,clever and skillful
Wants: the world to die 
Situation:trying to make the the people fail like: do not go in there (when they should) 

Krys-clever and brave
Wants:to be rich
Situation: I will not let u hurt them

Cynux-nice and good a fighting
Wants:to help Jeff save the world
Situation:It is ok, no need to worry

Part I am writing about: desruption in the start when the time machine starts beeping. 

Setting: Roman castle,a shop a prison a wood 

Sound of thunder: Ray Bradbury

Tuesday, March 1, 2016

Colour code paragraph

The nun's priest

If a story is a fable then it need to have talking animals that act like humans, and a moral at the end. The Nuns Priest's tale is a fable in every way. It is a fable because a feature of a fable is that it has animals that talk and has a moral at the end. These examples tell me why it is a fable 'I knew your father well, you know.' This is sir Russell fox talking to Chaunticleer and he is an animal. The moral of this story is that you 'should always be on your guard against flatterers and who opens their mouth when they should keep then shut will get caught'.This is the moral since it teaches us something. Chaunticleer learns this.This is the part in the story which has a moral and talking animals.Sir Russell fox says: I knew your father very well..... but I think your voice might be better then his,then Chuanticleer says: just listen to this, and then Sir Russell fox catches him. This part has all the features of a fable.So in the end the Nun's priest is a fable since it has a moral at the end that you should always be on guard against flatters and has loads of talking animals Chaunticleer, Sir Russell fox etc. that act like people.

The Knights tale
If a story is a chivalric romance then it needs to have chivalric knights and courtly love. The Knights tale has all of the features. The Knights tale is a chivalric romance becuase it has chivalric Knights and there is a joust at the end. These are some examples that prove this: The Chivalric Knights are Palamon and Arcite they are chivalric Knights since they fight for the love of Emily. An example that proves that are Chivalric Knights when one of them escaped they did not tell on the other this is Chivalric. There is joust at the and the winner gets Emily. Palamon wins since he wanted Emily but Arcite wanted to win. Another feature of a Chivalric romance is that there is romance, there is romance between Palamon and Emily and Arcite and Emily. So to sum this up the Knights tale is a Chivalric romance since it has Chivalric Knights Palamon and Arcite and has romance between the Knights and Emily.

The wife of bath
If a story is a folktale then it needs to sound realistic has peasants and explains something. The wife of bath has all of these features. The wife of bath is a folktale since it has peasants, it sounds realistic and also explains something. These are the examples that prove it:The peasant is Emily since she is just a normal girl in the forest. Also the wife of bath sounds realistic, The wife of bath is set in a castle and a forest which is a realistic place and it has people Sir the Codsbrain, Amanda etc. not monster in fantasy stories.The last feature of a folktale is that it explains something. The wife of bath explains something which is: that the thing that woman most desire is power and that it is better to love someone properly than loving someone beautiful. Sir Codsbrain learns this the hard way. So this is why the wife of bath is a folktale since it has peasants (Amanda), it sounds realistic since it has people (Amanda) and teaches us something which is do not go flirting with Radom girls.


The pardoner's tale 


A morality tale is a story that teaches you something through the story and has a moral at the end. The pardoner's tale has this feature. The pardoner's tale teaches us something and has a moral at the end. These are the examples: 'if you go looking for death, don't be surprised if you find him'. This is the moral of the story and Dick,Tom and Harry learn this. They went looking for death this happens since Ambrosius dies becuase he was so drunk then when they golooking for death a old man tells them where to go (which is a next wo a tree)and then they die since they were so greedy for the gold. So this is why the pardoner's tale is a folktale because it has a moral at the end which teaches us to not go looking for death or you will die.